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Liz <3's avatar

Painfully beautiful and full of emotion. Sending loveee 💕

celeste's avatar

thank youuuu!!

fatima's avatar

thank u for sharing this. sending hugs and love your way meri jaan

celeste's avatar

thank uuuuu

Cipher⁉️✨✨'s avatar

My heart goes out to you rn this is so hard but I'm so glad you were able to write the feeling out

celeste's avatar

thank you!! im glad you liked!!

annabeth seth's avatar

stop doing to my heart please😔 this is so incredibly beautiful.

caroline cherry's avatar

such a great use of shift!! you flipped the script on us!

celeste's avatar

thank youuu for reading!! that was the goall! i'm glad it got across well!!

Annie's avatar

This is so heartbreakingly beautiful omg😭🥺🫶

celeste's avatar

thank you loveee!! im glad you liked!!

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

i love the mix of sadness and hatred in this one

celeste's avatar

me too - trust i've been feeling a mix of both.

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

sending you hugs :( 🫂

xins ꩜ ᶻ 𝗓 .ᐟ's avatar

oh my gosh the two perspectives!!! SO BEAUTIFUL

celeste's avatar

thank you loveeee, this means so muchhhhh

Stella's avatar

This poem is PHENOMENAL. I LOVE the way you expressed your thoughts and emotions while keeping a FANTASTIC structure for the poem. Chefs kiss 💐

celeste's avatar

thank you my loveeee - this was a hard one

Rey's avatar

i’m literally sending you so much love and so many hugs and all of my unconditional support. this was not an easy read… this was in fact so hard to read. it hurts that this is the feeling inside of you. i want to shield you from whoever made you feel this way. it is so beautiful, but so heartbreaking… i teared up while reading this… my heart and support goes out to you ❤️🫂

Rey's avatar

oh my gosh… don’t this to me celeste, i’m already in so much pain 😔🫂 it was going so well