reflections and firelight
on leaving the cave
chained up in a cave,
i watched the shadows flicker on the wall,
since i cried my first tear,
i was a prisoner of that cave.
my ambitions ablaze behind me,
the fire revealing only the outlines of the world.
i named these illusions,
but how could i see anything else,
if i was forced to keep my head still my whole life?
when you pulled me up the ragged slope,
the upward path deterred me.
the bright light blinded me,
and the sun burned my skin.
i craved for the comfort,
of the walls that used to haunt me.
i longed for the chains,
the silhouettes flickering by.
the shadows were clearer than reflections,
i longed for the simple outlines,
the details made everything fuzzy,
but my eyes grew accustomed to the light.
i leaned out over the river,
trying desperately for a view of the reflections,
you dropped my hand,
and i fell back into the cave.
my eyes filled with darkness,
after being in the sun for so long,
i could barely make out the clean edges,
i wished for the details, the lines on my face,
that i saw in the water.
the colors of your eyes,
brighter than the bluest skies.
i waited for a melody,
but all i heard was the echoes of us,
the darkness drowned out the truth,
the truth i saw looking back at me,
among the ripples of the water.



oh i love this, it has a darker vibe to somehow and reminds me of how sirens lured people at sea!
Wow… this is hauntingly beautiful. I love how you’ve woven Plato’s cave allegory with this deeply personal, almost romantic longing....it reads like both a philosophical meditation and an emotional confessional. The tension between the comfort of shadows and the painful clarity of light is so palpable.