wow this is so beautiful cel!!!!!! π₯Ή i love how you compared how people are practically always moving forward with the waves β expressing that itβs okay to not want to progress like everyone is, and that itβs more important to find your footing so beautifully π€ this brought some calm to me, and i really love your writing :(
I loved this - such a powerful read. Your words felt abstractly perfect. I really connected with the line, βI drifted from interest to interest like a bottle passed hand to hand, each person shaking me gently, checking if I still held something worth keeping.β
This world asks so much of us when weβre all just trying to stay afloat, riding wave after wave, doing what we can to survive it all. Truly a beautiful post.π
celeste, "i mistook momentum for meaning", that line is going to stay with me for a loooong time! this whole piece reads like finally exhaling after holding your breath underwater, and i hope you find that shoreline that just lets you wring the salt from your hair :)
Very beautiful literature keep up with your writing
thank you so much!! this comment means so much to me!!
wow this is so beautiful cel!!!!!! π₯Ή i love how you compared how people are practically always moving forward with the waves β expressing that itβs okay to not want to progress like everyone is, and that itβs more important to find your footing so beautifully π€ this brought some calm to me, and i really love your writing :(
thank you!! im so glad you dug so deep into this - thats exactly what i was hoping for!! i love youuuuu
stunning!!! felt it all strongly <3
thank you so much!! this means a lot!!
this was so stunning and emotional <333
i love you lucia!!! thank you for reading it!!!
this means... a lot. i'm in a phase where i'm unsure how to move forward in life and... this just expresses it. thank you for this lovely poem...
im so glad it resonated!! this means so much!!
so beautiful π
thank you loveee
I loved this - such a powerful read. Your words felt abstractly perfect. I really connected with the line, βI drifted from interest to interest like a bottle passed hand to hand, each person shaking me gently, checking if I still held something worth keeping.β
This world asks so much of us when weβre all just trying to stay afloat, riding wave after wave, doing what we can to survive it all. Truly a beautiful post.π
celeste, "i mistook momentum for meaning", that line is going to stay with me for a loooong time! this whole piece reads like finally exhaling after holding your breath underwater, and i hope you find that shoreline that just lets you wring the salt from your hair :)
So beautiful! <3
you write so beautifully!!
Oh how I love the waters.
yeah when you're poet laureate or win a Pulitzer for poetry I can say i knew you then
Crying, this is so beautifully written; I loved the ending sm <3
You have a way with words that pulls me in like a magnet, sweet celeste, this is utterly radiant, as are you π€
I love this. For a while it felt like you were describing my life. Then I realized you were describing my life.
Celeste. This is so stunning.
βiβm tired of being seaworthy.
tired of proving i can survive
storms i didnβt summon.β
Such a beautiful and mystifying piece. Loved every minute of it